After reading the first few chapters I was hooked. It sort of reminds me of the Slender Man (I suggest you Google it if you don't know). Right now there are a lot of questions we need answer. The only thing I worry is we may get too many POV's. In the sample we already got three from Ryder, Mack and Lane. Is that going to continue?
Despite that little critique I am fully invested in this book
Despite that little critique I am fully invested in this book