This story was written very well!! It keeps you interested and wanting more from start to finish!! One thing I really liked was that one character couldn't remember much about his past but soon he started to which led to a major revenge scheme!! I also liked that the story was put into two parts. You get to see two characters stories and how they get to where they are now and how they connect and reconnect. It's also nice having the longer chapters because you get to stay with certain points of the story longer. There is definetly alot of action as well!! I also like how the whole story brings out where rib king came from and how it was made and what became of that and all the people involved at the time!! This story also gives you an inside look to how people were treated depending on thier race back then. It also shows how some people despite race issues achieved thier dreams or something close to it.