The first chapter ended with a great cliff hanger to get the reader to want to read more. Find out more about Will Sanders. Also, to find out why he was not dead when they were at his funeral. The relationship between Knox and the main female character - I'd like the chance to watch their relationship flourish. At least, I hope flourish.
The writing was consistent and I liked the style of writing.
The writing was consistent and I liked the style of writing.