Intriguing beginning
I love the cover of this one. Though I thought before reading the excerpt that it was chocolate pouring into the cup... not sure what I think about it being weird-colored blood. The way it drips through the words is very nice.
I'm not completely hooked by the excerpt. The italics bit is overly long and the whole thing is a bit dry and keeps the reader at arms length.
I'm intrigued by the politcal intrigue and the synopsis though.
I'm not completely hooked by the excerpt. The italics bit is overly long and the whole thing is a bit dry and keeps the reader at arms length.
I'm intrigued by the politcal intrigue and the synopsis though.