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This sample was amazing. This story was deep and emotional. It's about a school shooting and some of the survivors coming back 12 years later to make a documentary about that night.

Olivia was from the wrong side of the tracks, she's rebellious, dyed her hair, wore thick make-up, and was Finn's, the football star, secret girlfriend. His parent's would flip out if they knew he was dating their lawn mower's daughter. So she put up with being his little secret. On prom night, 2 kids had a list of kids to kill, and Liv wasn't on it. Finn and Liv were in the janitor's closet fighting over when mayhem broke out. Finn ran out the the closet to help his date, leaving Liv to fend for herself.

Seeing Finn again brings back old memories and hurt feelings. He knows that he was a coward in so many ways; especially with hiding their relationship.