Seems a little disjointed
I was enjoying the first part of the synopsis but then felt like the third paragraph took a turn and I was very confused. I think that this seems like a good idea for a book and would be able to capture the readers attention.
I was not crazy about the cover design. It kind of looks like a raunchy romance novel cover which does not attract me.
I was not crazy about the cover design. It kind of looks like a raunchy romance novel cover which does not attract me.