Interesting start

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This was a really strong start! The setting as a whole has really been set up in these two distinct chapters. The girls as well, we're well aware of their main conflicts regarding each other, along with some hints that Cee's memory may be worse than she realizes. There are many promises for twists and turns in the next coming pages

And that cover is utterly gorgeous. The faces, the movement of the waves; wonderful!