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I read the book's description and was interested because I wanted to see how scary it would be. The first two chapters weren't scary so I was a little letdown. Maybe there will be more action and gore later in the book, but the beginning didn't get me hooked. I was also confused by chapter 2 because the storyline abruptly changes to another scene. If each chapter focused only on one character I think it would be easier to follow. Chapter one did a great job describing the characters but I didn't think it was as thorough in chapter two. I won't be continuing this book because the First Look did not successfully capture my interest. I think the plot could be interesting but I don't know when the action will begin.