Super interesting premise.

This first look was compelling. I wasn't sure I'd like what was happening when I was reading the descriptions on the first page, but the idea of a voice inside of someone's head being a narrator was something I found super interesting. The sense of urgency was immediate. It was well-written, and entertaining. I'd definitely read more of this one to see what the fog turns out to be and if people manage to solve the murder in time or not. I can absolutely see this appealing to mystery, sci-fi, and apocalypse narrative readers alike.