Cool premise but I’m uncertain about the opening chapters.

The writing style is very in-your-face and has some grit to it but I’m not sure how enjoyable it’s going to be in the long run and the conversations between the characters are iffy. My main concern is in how interesting the main description of this book is and yet the first chapter (almost two) don’t seem very reflective of that potential. The cover is also pretty bland, like one that would fade in the background if I were scouring through a bunch of books.