The Janes seems like an interesting concept for a storyline. I'm always drawn to these types of stories of murder and mystery. The first chapter is kind of hard to read, full of staccato sentences, so it's offputting to have that kind of chapter as the first thing you read in a book. There also seems to be quite a lot of dialogue, which can sometimes make following the storyline hard. Overall, the concept seems interesting, and I'm sure there will be twists and turns and something to keep readers reading and guessing.