From the very first page, I can "hear" Caleb, if that makes sense! His narrative voice, to me, is not just distinct and authentic, but compelling. It compels you to buy into this high intensity high school experience. And for a story that I predict will center so much on empathy and internal life and mental health... wow, putting us as readers immediately in "conversation" with Caleb, in his headspace, is an awesome move!
The switch in perspectives, introducing Adam's voice (distinct and authentic in its own way) at this stage, just reinforces what for me is, so far, a clear strength of the writing: narrative voice(s).
Just a few random notes before I close...
I have a sense this is going to be an important book in terms of representation. As a high school ELA teacher, I LOVE and admire stories that can serve as mirrors and windows for my kids (and me too, let's be honest).
Also, the fact this story builds from a podcast?! Awesome. I love that kind of adaptation and world-building. I think, too, it adds an appeal for adolescent readers... Reading a book is sometimes a commitment in their eyes, and it makes a difference if it's not just A story, but a story "world" (e.g. sequel anticipated; Netflix adaptation; podcast!) they're committing to.
The switch in perspectives, introducing Adam's voice (distinct and authentic in its own way) at this stage, just reinforces what for me is, so far, a clear strength of the writing: narrative voice(s).
Just a few random notes before I close...
I have a sense this is going to be an important book in terms of representation. As a high school ELA teacher, I LOVE and admire stories that can serve as mirrors and windows for my kids (and me too, let's be honest).
Also, the fact this story builds from a podcast?! Awesome. I love that kind of adaptation and world-building. I think, too, it adds an appeal for adolescent readers... Reading a book is sometimes a commitment in their eyes, and it makes a difference if it's not just A story, but a story "world" (e.g. sequel anticipated; Netflix adaptation; podcast!) they're committing to.