The first paragraph is very odd and I wonder why it even started out with the weather. It seems to me to just be filler . That the author didn't even know how to start the story.
I know the first chapter was ment to grab the readers attention and draw them into the story, but it didnt work for me.
Im sure the story gets better but after reading the begining it woulndt be a must read book for me.
I know the first chapter was ment to grab the readers attention and draw them into the story, but it didnt work for me.
Im sure the story gets better but after reading the begining it woulndt be a must read book for me.