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Right from the start, you feel drawn into the story. We first are introduced to the narrator that seems to welcome you with open arms. The way the narration is written, it's like you are sitting and listening to an old friend tell you a story. The excerpt just give you the main points about what the story is about, without giving away too much. It leaves you wanting to know more.
"There were seven of us in all, trapped on the island.
One of us was a murderer." This was my favorite line from the excerpt. Can't wait to read the rest.