I got invested.

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So far, the narrative is really suspenseful and dramatic. I would love to see what happens when all the secrets come to light. The first few chapters are entertaining and easy to read, but I don't feel very attached to the characters yet. I think this might be because there are four separate perspectives to follow, and it's hard to really get to know each character so far. I'd love to read more to see their development and have their secrets unveiled. I thought the cover was pretty and fitting for what the story seems to be about so far: someone looking over her shoulder, wondering what she will find there, perhaps in an attempt to make an escape.