One Giant Mistake

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This book seems to whipsaw back and forth across five different places in the span of sixteen pages and the transitions feel messy and abrupt. It's almost impossible to follow the dialogue between the different characters and Alice, who's telling the story. From her younger daughter, to her older daughter, to her younger daughter's teacher, to her employee, to her husband, to her ex, to her husband again, to her daughter's teacher again, to her younger daughter again. It feels like it has no flow and no purpose to it.