The world of fanfic has fascinated me. It was a fun way to open this narrative. I was fan of the humor interlaced throughout the start of the story. I felt for the loss the characters experienced and what they were working on overcoming between the two of them. This premise drew me in and made me interested to know how the story was going to build upon what the beginning gave us. Superhero and police conflict is engaging as is the dynamics between fathers and sons. I could see some use of foreshadowing when it came to the fanfic and the main character with reference to ADHD. Having a teenage son diagnosed with ADHD it is important to see it represented. It matters that it is viewed properly.