Wow, what a great start. I was a little iffy when it started right out with the fanfiction, but I'm glad it did. It shows how much the main character loves it, and makes it that much more heartfelt. I love the relationship between the main character and his dad and I was smiling hardcore because of how sweet they are. I didn't know what I was going into, but it was definitely not what I expected. It was much better!