A tad cheesy but has potential

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First, I love the cover. The color choices help the people pop of the background and pull your focus and the typography is simple but pretty.

When I started the read I was confused, I didn’t realize right off the bat that I was reading the MC fan fiction. I thought it was the actual story and felt like it was a little to cheesy and over the top. When I realized it was just the characters writing, and that it was fan fiction, I understood. Fan fiction is meant to be silly, cheesy and a bit over the top.

That being said the story has potential and I like the idea of super hero’s and villains while the MC is an ordinary human.