Jumps right into the action

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It jumps right into the action from the start, setting a fast pace. The main character is likeable and smart so far, but not particularly distinctive yet (there’s still plenty of time for character development). The premise has potential. The love interest hasn’t been spotted yet, so I can’t say anything about the romance. Overall, looks promising and fun.