Great Ideas but Heavy on Exposition

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I loooooved the idea behind this novel - sharks are my favorite animal and I love diverse novels, so this sounded right up my alley! Unfortunately, the excerpt was very heavy on exposition and world-building. Too much so to catch my interest, though I'm sure the world in the story will be pretty interesting! I just need more stakes.