A thoughtful start, the story seems deep and original.

The concept of this novella is very interesting and different from most other fantasy novels that I read. My first impressions of the writing style or that it is very well done and descriptive. Intelligent but easy to understand. There seem to be multiple important characters and the main one is a sort of chosen one of great importance to the group. I find this sample intriguing enough to continue, and hope the back stories and character development are given added depth.