When I first saw this cover I was impressed. It's cool and slick. It would most definitely catch my eye in a store. Then I read the summary and I was ready to read it. It starts out decent but then goes and on describing different characters. Maybe the excerpt ended before it had a chance to develop or maybe we need all that info in order to understand the story but by the end I was no longer interested. The writing style was decent, it just didn't present the characters or the story in a way that I wanted to keep reading.