A *Charming* Beginning

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This is off to such a great start! I love the dual perspectives. Each character seems well rounded and each has a great story. Hawkins is a wizard at getting the reader to feel certain emotions at different times. Lastly, Dove Pind sounds like the perfect small town!

Only thing I didn’t like was the bit of language I’ve seen so far. Unnecessary.