Intriguing idea poorly executed
Feels like this was a high school English project not something that would be published. Poor writing quality. Definitely needs some major edits.
Having said that am very interested in the plot. If there was some editing, would be eager to read the rest of the book. Want to know the ending.
Having said that am very interested in the plot. If there was some editing, would be eager to read the rest of the book. Want to know the ending.