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The cover and title are captivating. I read the first chapter sample. It feels more for being set during world war 2. The main female character seems to be extremely feminist which may play well, but with how it was hammered into the reader in the first few pages it can 1. turn readers off 2. lead to minimal character development later or 3. none of the above and end awesome.