Drew me in

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It drew me in quickly and I didn't want to stop reading. When I got to the last page, I needed there to be more.

The only thing that kind of threw me off was when the first chapter was a different character. Maybe it fits in well with the rest of the book, but just from the preview, I feel like it might give too much away.