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The cover seemed very interesting, if I were to see it in a book store I would probably pick it up and read what it was about. Based on what it said it was about it seemed interesting and it seemed like it would go well with the world we are living in today. But after reading part of it I was extremely confused. Not only was it not always grammatically correct, but it had all these slashes throughout which made it quite difficult to understand. If the dad was putting boxes around the switch so that no one would be able to get to the switch then why were his children all inside of the boxes and why were they able to get out of the boxes and be able leave and return to them as they saw fit. It just doesn’t make a whole lot of sense. Over all this doesn’t seem like a book I would be interested in finishing.