Excited to read more
I loved the opening and was hooked from the beginning, especially the repetition of once upon a time as a hook. It drew me right into the story.
I'm already invested in the main character and I'm excited to see where this story goes! I really enjoy the friendship between Sunny, Jamal, and Milo as well.
I'm already invested in the main character and I'm excited to see where this story goes! I really enjoy the friendship between Sunny, Jamal, and Milo as well.