Awful Story Writing

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I don't even know what this was. I wanted to like this so badly, the summary made it sound so good
40% of this books gets 3 stars the rest is a negative 1 star review. What awful awful writing and story this is. Where are these stellar ratings coming from?!

Up until the whole weird surprise God thing it was alright. Then it got too weird and read as if the author ran out of an idea to write the other half of the book. Everything was rushed and nothong fit together. DNF for me big time. Boring. Didn't make sense. Could have been several other ways Zephyr could have come back or continued to exists as she was. Why it was written with this huge 360 degree turn around from the beginning i dont understand. Not worth the read. Don't think I'll be reading anything by this author anytime soon. Too bad really because this has so so much potential and turned out to be a big flop.