I'm intrigued

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Part 1: Cover.
I really liked the cover, that caught my eye first and honestly that's why I clicked on it right away. I like everything about it. Colors, the title looks cool with the sparkly smoke effect on the words stars and smoke, but it's also almost like a spot light on the "star" who is being focused on while "the jackle" is more in the background. Because she's a spy. I really liked it.
Part 2: Story
I also really liked the story! Winter seems like an odd character and I can't decide how I feel about him. He seems like he's kind of stuck up but I think it's him masking his problems, especially in the beginning. He really does seem to believe that the world revolves around him and because of that, he's kind of annoying. But he also is interesting compared to his brother and I think that is the thing, that he's compared to his brother and that really impacts him. He also seems attention seeking which makes sense. I wanna know how he's gonna grow, even though I don't necessarily like him as person.
Part 3:
I really really really like the opening, the conversation in the mission log. I'm excited to meet those characters who were involved in that