I enjoyed the discussion between Jessica and Jim that established her backstory and the teleportation process. It was a nice way to ease into world-building without being too science-heavy. The personal touches of Jim's thoughts on her life and her parents' decisions, adding emotion and humanity to their preparations.
The tension as Jessica woke alone at the wrong destination and investigated the lander and crash site was gripping. She is smart and capable but reacts naturally, emotionally, to the unfolding events.
When the stranger appears and speaks to Jessica, my mouth dropped open and I eagerly kept reading. I look forward to seeing these two journey across the alien planet!
The tension as Jessica woke alone at the wrong destination and investigated the lander and crash site was gripping. She is smart and capable but reacts naturally, emotionally, to the unfolding events.
When the stranger appears and speaks to Jessica, my mouth dropped open and I eagerly kept reading. I look forward to seeing these two journey across the alien planet!