While the plot is interesting, I feel too much is going on in the beginning chapters. I want to focus on the damaged patient and who may have tried to harm her. Not concerned yet about the back issues and divorce. The faulty door at home is relevant but the fact she would attend a meeting at night when she's worried about other things going on in her life doesn't make sense to me. That, and to let the high school friend she'd recently met slip out without getting more of her story is disappointing. Why mention her at all? I sort of felt she may have a connection when we're told the distance between schools and where she lives now. But then she just slips off without a word.
Not sure why her being late for work matters or what she was up to. I would have liked a little more insight into how this mom would feel about the daughter rather than curiosity about her old chum's life.
I'm sure it's a decent story, but I'm not sure if I would keep reading or not.
Not sure why her being late for work matters or what she was up to. I would have liked a little more insight into how this mom would feel about the daughter rather than curiosity about her old chum's life.
I'm sure it's a decent story, but I'm not sure if I would keep reading or not.