Yelling In Middle of Store

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Yes, mystery stories starting off with a bang. I am not into it into it but I do appreciate that it works to immediately get reader attention.

She is yelling in middle of store where other customers can know what is going on which is against what ransomers usually want.
Objectively, I can see the perspective it gives on nursing as interesting. I think I just am not connecting with the writing.