Couldn't get past the first chapter

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I tried very hard, but I couldn't get past the first chapter. The writing style is strange. I get it, that he's trying to write first person through the main character, uneducated and gritty. But incomplete sentences and poor grammar fill the pages, not just the dialogue, making it very difficult to read. And there are not nearly enough details. I cannot paint a picture in my head like I can with most books.