First of all, the cover is really bland and doesn't catch my attention. It doesn't give any hints as to what the book is really about, which I think a cover should do (or at least reveal the genre). The topic of a teenager starting an affair with a forty-something man is gross and I really wouldn't want to read a book to see where this goes. The writing feels choppy and doesn't flow in my head as it should. It just falls short on so many levels.