A Very Slow Start

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This book started out very slow. The story could have taken place on any tropical island, the geography wa over done and went on too long. The writing style is very clipped. It jumps around and and seems to me as just setting a scene. I think the story will get better as it goes on but the first look was not what I was expecting.