Interesting Opening

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The characters in this story are very engaging. I think the premise is a little shaky though. A single woman who rented a place and then some random man appears inside her place would be cause to immediately leave I would think, but it works for the foundation of this storyline. I am intrigued to see how the father daughter relationship plays out.