Not crazy about the cover. It feels a bit like 1960s scifi/fantasy. And I definitely don't like quotes on the front cover - it makes it feel like the book is trying too hard. If there must be an endorsement, at least put it on the back of the book. The synopsis is okay. It uses too many dashes and exclamation points, again like it's trying to hard. I would be interested in reading more about Jewish mythology and fantasy is my genre. The excerpt was well written and dove right into the story. I'm sure this will have an audience with middle grade readers.