Intriguing, perhaps?

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I'm intrigued enough by the writing style to be interested in continuing the story, but 5 pages is so little to go on to know whether plot would really interest me. There's quite a bit packed into those 5 pages, apparently we have a protagonist that remembers nothing about his life before becoming a gun for hire, a best friend that owes him a blood debt and would see him pursue the girl who seems to recognize and love him from "before." Whatever before was. The writing style flows well and the characters seem to be getting developed, but I can't say more than that with only a 5 page first look.