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Not sure of this one. Don't know how the cover fits in with the title, the excerpt, or the blurb.

Upside: You definitely get the seniors in highschool vibe from the excerpt. That something bad is going to happen very quickly is also quite apparent. This small snippet could be leading the reader into an horror story or the beginning of a mystery/thriller. Interesting to see which way this goes.

Downside: nothing of any immediate concern.