Great beginning!
This story looks like it will be absorbing, entertaining and adventurous. I like the way Ms. Graham uses Davey's emotions to build suspense, and the way the other characters, even though they are seniors and think they are all grown up, act a bit childish.
The story so far definitely has my attention, and I can't wait to read the entire book. I like the cover art as well and think it shows the reader a good idea of what the story is about and maybe where it leads.
The story so far definitely has my attention, and I can't wait to read the entire book. I like the cover art as well and think it shows the reader a good idea of what the story is about and maybe where it leads.