What is the heart of the matter?
Beginning needs to grab the reader. Could we see the father sooner and how he influences the son?
The cover is a little too much heart. Doubt it would get many to open it. Maybe a romance reader would?
Begin in the surgical suite?
Beginning needs to grab the reader. Could we see the father sooner and how he influences the son?
The cover is a little too much heart. Doubt it would get many to open it. Maybe a romance reader would?
Begin in the surgical suite?