Descriptively Amusing

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I think the cover looked great and suits the overall feeling of what this story is about.

I have to say when I began to read the first page, I was highly amused by the descriptive language! I felt this gruff, rough voice I heard through the tone of the words really captured the era of where the characters inhabited. Despite the toughness in the words, I also found a sort of beauty within it.

I also feel the characters were well written in my point of view and makes me want to read more!