Draws me in, but...

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The cover and synopsis of Murder Mile make the book sound interesting, but unfortunately the writing level just isn't up to par for me. The author does a good job of drawing the reader into an active scene quickly, but the writing just seems juvenile and the dialogue between characters forced, like she's trying too hard to tell the story instead of letting it come naturally. While the storyline sounds interesting, the writing would get in the way of me enjoying it.