Writing style not for me

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Within the first page I could tell that this author wasn't for me. I don't know if it's because some of the dialogue was from someone who doesn't speak English, but either way, it felt like things didn't flow smoothly. The premise of the story is interesting, but I can't say that I'm drawn to the characters that we are following. Overall, I'm going to have to pass on this one.