Interesting start
In general, this subject matter isn't usually my cup of tea. However, I think the writing is strong overall.
People who like stories involving the military may find this more gripping and thrilling than I did. I think the friendship aspect has the potential to be really impactful as well.
People who like stories involving the military may find this more gripping and thrilling than I did. I think the friendship aspect has the potential to be really impactful as well.