Interesting Beginning

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I definitely felt the way the boy felt about his father. And then for his father to get hurt and die like that just made me feel the hurt that he must feel about it. I feel like I'm not sure how the story will go just yet, because it was only a few pages, but it intrigued me enough to be curious about where it will go and what will happen next.