The prologue is what gets you! I mean that is how it should be. Opening up with murder. Then reading how a bunch of college ages kids get on a ship for 4 months. You meet Jade who was backstabbed by her so called best friend Lainey. Sounds like good drama.
The first impression has you wanting more because of how it's left off. You want to keep scrolling yet the pages are not turning. Could have given just a pinch more though.
The first impression has you wanting more because of how it's left off. You want to keep scrolling yet the pages are not turning. Could have given just a pinch more though.