Solid start, solid writing.
Jade's pretty cool, although the other characters feel one-dimensional. Especially when Felix was introduced. He wears a dark camouflage jacket, a black shirt, something about his jeans, and his nickname is "Brooding Boy." It kind of made me laugh because he reminds me of the bad-boy-that-broods in YA. I mean his nickname is Brooding Boy, how could I not.
I want to keep going though. I feel like there's something behind Silas and Lainey's betrayal so I'd love to keep reading. Plus her murder of course.
Jade's pretty cool, although the other characters feel one-dimensional. Especially when Felix was introduced. He wears a dark camouflage jacket, a black shirt, something about his jeans, and his nickname is "Brooding Boy." It kind of made me laugh because he reminds me of the bad-boy-that-broods in YA. I mean his nickname is Brooding Boy, how could I not.
I want to keep going though. I feel like there's something behind Silas and Lainey's betrayal so I'd love to keep reading. Plus her murder of course.